POEM- SUPERNOVA

 
POEM- SUPERNOVA


once as always, i was so vivid
it cause the amatures to hold the breathe
my death was even vivid
it caused them to caught the breathe

what you see now was done time before
the poor beaming light is too slow to caught up the shot
poor you to see me with those petty eyes
probably light wont bless this genration to stuck their minds
even after my appearance is much tragic
my glooming past will serve you chills

my life is revolved around death
i was born with it , i will lead to it
amatures find me beautiful
silly them, i was result of something contagious
i am a prime of what it seems isnt always true
to all those great dities of knowledge i m just a dot
dot to some, some for cosmo
i am just a star, heading for my home
                                                       - Aditi Singh 




                                     supernova viewed by kepler


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  1. fun fact - the death of any star is what leads to supernova
    it is result of time that probably is too big to record
    it appears showstopping , but if you go deep into it
    lets just say is isnt good

    and our baby sun is also in its way to lead to its home {to become supernova}

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  2. "my life is revolved around death
    i was born with it , i will lead to it"

    I don't know anything about supernova😫😟
    But i liked this line

    Good job bestie 👍☺️☺️

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  3. Wow this becomes too deep at last😲
    Probably my fav one from you till now
    Well done aaduuu👍👍

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  4. " i am a prime of what it seems isnt always true"

    Contrast
    Ma'am i identified correct literary device?
    Haha 😂

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  5. i dont remeber it being up for boards🤣🤣

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  6. as a fellow space enthusiast , i LOVE this

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  7. I have read all your poems on this site. I loved your creations. I love you Miss Aditi❤💕. I really love you😍😍

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