POEM- I HAVE LOST SOMETHING THAT USED TO BE MINE OWN !
POEM- I HAVE LOST SOMETHING THAT USED TO BE MINE OWN !
My mind is owned by webs ,
who design my each and every steps,
the control? oh, it is long gone,
i have lost something that used to be mine own!
i have lost something that used to be mine own
maybe thats why , all my action makes you frown?
who really am i ? it is not told to me yet ,
still waiting to receive my identity outlet!
the waiting of mine continues for hours
this society has not yet controlled all my brainpowers
what should i do? you decide,
who am i even to raise my own voice?
who am i even to raise my own voice?
when you are the one who runs my website !
please lord! next time make me the owner of this society!
so i can make our "social norms" to have no identitiy.
who am i even to fight against this cyclone?
maybe,
its because i have lost something that used to be mine own
i am more than willing to use my mind by means of mine
anyways, still why am i even afraid to break this pureline?
- ADITI SINGH
The ways it is written is truly appreciable
ReplyDeleteFelt happy to read all your poems today Aditi.
Please make sure to Nacer leave this talent of yours
Bless you
thank you so much maam
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ReplyDeletethis is so good aditi
ReplyDeletemissing you
from dakshita
dakshita💛💛
DeleteWhat does pure line indicate here in reference to poem?
ReplyDeleteHere it means to take action against something that was never even thought off
DeleteIn a way to break something pure(never touched)
I didnt mean to confuse you
In a way i just wanna say it to break our "pure" society norms
Cause no one has ever dared to do it
Sorry for confusion
Happy reading!